Hey Guys this is my Malama Houna experience and I want you to read it and
see what you think about it and tell me what I need to work on next time or
what have I done good enjoy.
Hey Stanley it's great to see you blogging in the holidays. I liked the way you said that you could hear the waves crashing together and by the way that was a amazing descriptive but next time you could maybe proofread your work because some of the slides didn't make sense. But overall it was a great experience and well done.
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Hey Stanley it's great to see you blogging in the holidays. I liked the way you said that you could hear the waves crashing together and by the way that was a amazing descriptive but next time you could maybe proofread your work because some of the slides didn't make sense. But overall it was a great experience and well done.
From Mehi
Ok then Thank Mehi, So now I know what to work on next time
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